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Stained Veil: Chapter 10
Peter finished his dishes ignoring the photo portrait of Lisa.
"Peter!" Cried Martha, "Im home!"
"Yay! You are here." Celebrated Peter, "I was waiting for you to come back."
'Hey! Go wake up Minnie!" Instructed Martha, "You will won't you?" Martha set the groceries on the kitchen counter and put the almond milk, cheese and other stuff in the fridge. Peter ran up the stairs to Minnie's room. 
"Minnie!" Called Peter. The room was silent.
"Boo!" Screamed Minnie, Peter jumped a bit.
"Wow Minnie, you for sure scared me this time for real!" Smiled Peter
"Really?" Asked Minnie, "Anyways, is mom back?" It was strange how Minnie asked when she already knew the answer, she walked downstairs holding her stuffed polar bear she named Snowflake and greeted Martha, "Hi Mom!"
"Oh hi dear." Greeted Martha. 
"Did you get me ice cream like you said?" Asked Minnie, Martha handed her a cone topped with mint chocolate chip
When Peter went in to the kitchen looking for a napkin for Minnie in case s
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Literature
Stained Veil: Chapter 9
"She could be right." Thought Ellsnorth, "The escapees did break out and there were reports of a street war in Brooklyn." "Death will be among us." 
"Aaah, it is getting awfully broing sitting in this chair all day long, I thought they would treat me like a greek goddess but all that is happening is people walking around and the rest ask me for permission to go to IHOP or Ganso Ramen all day." Complained Lexi "I order you all to do something interesting!" A gangster walked up to her
"You want interesting?" Asked the gangster "Well I got what you want!" Lexi's right eyebrow rose in the air only 10 percent amused already, then he just, SMACK! He fell on the ground. 
"Wow. I am so amused! Clap clap clap!" Sarcastically applauded Lexi. The guy walked away thinking it worked even though her sarcasm was so obvious "Eh, getting accused of killing my life long friend kind of led me to power, but why do I still care that I am innocent?" Asked Lexi. 
Ellsnorth was
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Literature
Paws: Chapter 3
"Yes Crowford?"Asked Sunrise, "My prince, I have reports from the scouts, King Iceknife has came back from Greentail wounded." Reported Crowford, "My young apprentice, it is most disappointing how you report news I already see. It is worse that the scouts you select are even slower than the apprentices of Icefang." Reprimanded Sunrise, "My prince, I apologize for my unwise choices." Apologized Crowford. Sunrise did not speak a word and walked towards the food collection and found a few scraps of dragon meat found in a far reigon in Icefang, dragon meat is also a normal diet for phoenixes. "It is sad we do not have supplies to last us at least twelve moons alone." Thought Sunrise, "Well sir, we lack soldiers so we would parish within the first moon of war." Explained Crowford. "Crowford, send three good scouts  to watch over Icefang and three more to go to Greentail. Tell them to be back within the next two days." Ordered Sunrise, "Also run the place while I'm away, I'm
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Literature
Paws: Chapter 2
"If you want to fight then let's go." Responded Iceknife, he stood up his paws become icy gauntlets and Flora's rose tail shimmered in the light of day, innocent yet furious. "No Greentail shall interfere with this fight." Ordered Flora "And no Icefang shall interfere as well." Demanded Iceknife. A swing of Flora's tail barely left a scratch on the frozen iron of Iceknife's back plate armor. "Now it's my turn." Iceknife charged towards Flora for a strike, but Flora was able to react quickly she pointed her rose tail at Iceknife and ray of grass green and rose red bursted injuring Iceknife. "You woodland creatures always rely on magic in most times to help you all! You do not understand the true art of war and tactics!" "But at least I can fight and you savages lack the art of intelligence." Argued Flora. "Have you ever known that I know magic, but I don't depend on it!" Argued Iceknife, his eyes glowed of bright cyan and sparks of white emitting from them. Then a straight ray of mana b
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Literature
Paws: Chapter 1
In a land where only animals roam from the Greentail Forests to the Icefang Tundras separated under the rule of Flora, the queen of the forests of Greentail and a mighty fox with pelt as green as lively grass and a blooming rose for the tip of her tail, alongside with Iceknife, the king of all tundras in Icefang a mighty polar bear with the spikes of an icy mace lining down his back and paws armored by steel and everlasting ice. Long war has aged between the two for generations to come, "Queen Flora, our fellow woodland predators are not provided with the food we need, for the deer, elk and rabbits have vanished!" Exclaimed a fox scout. "We cannot last through anarchy!" "Calm down! where did you last see them?" Asked Flora, "They were last seen running towards the ruins of the Bladewing Mountains." Answered the scout. "I think they tried to escape after the hundreds of generations that tried!" Meanwhile, "After hundreds of years we escaped the paws of the woodland predators!" Celebrate
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Literature
Stained Veil: Chapter 8
"How many of you are there?" Asked Lexi "Do the math yourself." Scolded a recruit. Lexi reloaded her Uzi "Ok! I'll do it! So there were 70 Flamethrower gangsters then 10 to 15 of us died then you had 40 escapees then like 5 died so its at least 95 men you have Lexi." Estimated the recruit. "How much land do we control?" Asked Lexi, "Umm, strectching from 474 Fulton St to 300 Schermerhorn St." Answered a recruit. "I'm sure we could stretch to 61 Nevins St." Thought Lexi "But I like living near IHOP." Complained a recruit. "Oh! Don't forget that japanese place, Ganster Bombin'?" Added another recruit, "I'm sure its not Gangster Bombin'." Replied another recruit. "Its Ganso Ramen fools!" Shouted Lexi. "And we should not be talking about food right now! We are talking about getting more land!" "Now head to Nevins St. and get us more land!" 20 armed men marched Southeast at her will. "Commissioner Waynor, can I take the day off?" Requested Ellsnorth. "Fine, you may." Answered Waynor. Ellsno
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Literature
Stained Veil: Chapter 7
Gunshots ringed in the air of the streets, many gang members falling dead. The roads runned with blood and corpses. "I won't let you rule the streets of Brooklyn! The crown of New York shall be mine!" Cried Lexi, "Why should the crown belong to a lady like you?" Taunted Warren. Lexi got enraged and shot her gun like a mad woman, which she is and it shot the gas tank of Warren's car causing it to blow and burst in flames then it burned some of his men. "Oh it is on!" The gunshots kept going and going until sunrise. "You can't fight anymore?" Asked Lexi. "I will fight until the end!" Answered Warren. When he was not paying attention Lexi got to make her kill and shot Warren in the head with 5 bullets. "Warren!" Cried a gangster. His recruits got his phone and called 911 "Why are you calling the police for a gangster?" Asked a recruit. "It's legal to bring a criminal when they are hurt to an ambulance!" Answered another recruit. "Well he did fight until the end and as they say be careful
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Literature
Stained Veil: Chapter 6
At 224 Livingston Street, "Warren sir, another gang is rising in Bond Street, some of our troops were caught dead on the streets, what should we do?" asked a gang member. "Gather all the troops at 5pm, we will meet at 8-32 Bond St. where the 2 streets connect. It is time we have a gang war for the last 5 years." Answered Warren. "Mike, where is the spy I sent on the flamethrowers?" Asked Lexi. "He just came back, he reported that the Flamethrowers will go for an assault at 5pm. They will gather on 8-32 Bond Street." Informed Mr. Dawson." "Gather the troops at 4:30 I want to get 1 step ahead, or maybe 3." Thought Lexi. "Do we have a telephone? I need reinforcements to win this." Meanwhile at the start of Brooklyn, "We cant do 20 hours, we need to call for help." Thought an officer. "NYPD, how may I help you?" Asked a receptionist. "Hello we are from the Riley County Police Department, we are trying to get to 39 Bond St. to look for Brooklyn escapees." Answered an officer "About the esca
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Literature
Stained Veil: Chapter 5
"Professor Ellsnorth, Commissioner Waynor is calling a meeting." Informed Professor Brooks. "Hmm, no wonder the room was quiet. Ellsnorth walked upstairs and saw everybody there waiting for Commissioner Waynor to speak of why everybody was called. "Fellow comrades! New York is in grave danger, specifically Manhattan and Brooklyn!" Informed Waynor, "All the inmates from the Brooklyn House of Detention have escaped! According to the information sent by Warden Ledbury, they were led by the newest prisoner, Alexis Mayflee, a new era may come to New York." "If your named is called step up front." Instructed Chief Wentlon, "Maggie Evs, Lindsay Pevehouse, Tod Barnes and Michelle Vensor." The 4 that were called stepped up in front of Chief Wentlon. "You 4 shall be the leaders of the troops we send out to hunt the escapees." "Now with that said we shall send out our first troop 10 of you will go out and hunt the escapees, being led by Michelle. There is an abandoned building on 39 Bond St. They
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Literature
Stained Veil: Chapter 1
A day in Manhattan was a wedding day for Peter and Lisa in the Angel Orensanz Center, the bridesmaids got in place, the usher stood close to Peter trying to hold in his jokes and all 57 attendants sat. As the bride Lisa gracefully walked towards the altar where Peter patiently. "I Lisa Quanning take you Peter Gesevult for my lawful husband to have and hold from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and health, until death do us part. I Lisa Quanning take you, Peter Gesevult to be my husband." Vowed Lisa, "I Peter Gesevult take you Lisa Quanning for my lawful wife to have and hold from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and health, until death do us part. I Peter Gesevult take you, Lisa Quanning to be my wife." Vowed Peter. "You may kiss the bride." Announced the priest. the 2 leaned in for the kiss but before they laid contact a gunshot ringed in the air and a bullet flew right in the side of Lisa's h
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Literature
Stained Veil: Chapter 2
The police siren got louder and louder has they got closer to the Angel Orensanz Center. After a while of investigating there was only 3 clues, a 44 magnum revolver, a knife and a small towel. One of the officers took the clues to the lab and they found no fingerprints, "Professor Ellsnorth, did you find anything?" Asked an officer, "No, not a fingerprint even." Answered Professor Ellsnorth. "Get 2 officers, there is only 1 way to figure this out." The officer walked away to get the 2 best officers besides the sheriff and deputy. They got in a car and drove until 80 29th Street. Along the way they saw museums, small-time shops, only 2-4 in town, soon they reached Brooklyn in 40 minutes, close to their destination. Then they stopped at the Brooklyn House of Detention. Hello officer, may you take me to the interrogation room and fetch Mr. Jake Dawson will you?" "Yes Professor Ellsnorth, and Mr. Dawson should be there within 10-30 minutes. The officer escorted Professor Ellsnorth to the i
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Literature
Stained Veil: Chapter 2 Pt.2
"Thank you Mr. Dawson for the information." Thanked Ellsnorth. "Now if I may I need to get back to Manhattan. The professor left to the car parked up front and drove back to the Riley County Police Department. They saw the same things they saw at first and a bit more. They entered the building and went downstairs to the lab. Ellsnorth did a few minutes of thinking then. "I got it!" Figured out Ellsnorth. "If they used the towel when they pulled the trigger, they must have held the knife with bare hands!" Ellsnorth brushed the handle of the knife and found a hill-like fingerprint shape. It was similar to all the fingerprints of the bridesmaids. "Professor Brooks, can you have the receptionist call the 3 bridesmaids of Lisa Quanning." Ordered Ellsnorth. "Yes ma'm." Replied Professor Brooks. Within 3 days they all came. "Professor, why did you call us here?" Asked Anna. "One of you killed Lisa I know it was one of you because you all have a similar fingerprint to what is on a knife." Answ
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Stained Veil: Chapter 4
"To survive here, kill a cop get their keycard and gun to get everyone out of here. Unlock the doors at 10:30pm sharp, thats when the cops go overdose on the donuts." Instructed the inmate. Lexi agreed to the plan and took the knife. Then she walked up to a prison guard holding the knife behind her back. "Hello, Lexi. What do you have there?" Asked the guard. "Your end!" Answered Lexi, she jabbed him in the stomach at least 5 times, to her it felt nice for her then her prison uniform became severely stained with blood. She grabbed the keycard and gun, luckily nobody was around. "For freedom!" "Why should we follow a little woman like you?" Insulted an inmate. Lexi frowned and fired the guard's gun at the inmate who chose to disrespect her than freedom. "Who wants to follow him? If you do I'll make sure you will die in an instant!" Warned Lexi. Everyone decided to follow her than end up dead. 6 hours later the guards got in a sugar rush for too many donuts then fell in a deep sleep. Lex
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Stained Veil: Chapter 3
"Let go of me! I didn't do anything! Im innocent! I'll do anything!" Begged Lexi. The officers kept dragging her until they reached the car. "Looks like case is closed, I hope." Thought Ellsnorth. Meanwhile at the Gesevult Residence. "Mom, I just cannot let go of Lisa, it does not feel right, I even promised to make the shooter pay. Why can't I not let go of her?" Asked Peter, "Because she is your true love, and as being her true love you will do anything for each other." Answered Martha. "Also the Riley County Police Department just called, they got the shooter." "Well I guess everything is ok now, Lisa now lives in peace." Thought Peter. "I did not do anything! Believe me! Please!" Begged Lexi. Soon Lexi just sat in the corner, weeping and crying. "I did not do anything." Weeped Lexi. "Something does not feel right about locking Lexi up." Thought Ellsnorth. "Maybe that you sent a woman to a prison that is mostly men." Answered an officer. "No not that, but I just cannot point to what
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Peter finished his dishes ignoring the photo portrait of Lisa.
"Peter!" Cried Martha, "Im home!"
"Yay! You are here." Celebrated Peter, "I was waiting for you to come back."
'Hey! Go wake up Minnie!" Instructed Martha, "You will won't you?" Martha set the groceries on the kitchen counter and put the almond milk, cheese and other stuff in the fridge. Peter ran up the stairs to Minnie's room. 
"Minnie!" Called Peter. The room was silent.
"Boo!" Screamed Minnie, Peter jumped a bit.
"Wow Minnie, you for sure scared me this time for real!" Smiled Peter
"Really?" Asked Minnie, "Anyways, is mom back?" It was strange how Minnie asked when she already knew the answer, she walked downstairs holding her stuffed polar bear she named Snowflake and greeted Martha, "Hi Mom!"
"Oh hi dear." Greeted Martha. 
"Did you get me ice cream like you said?" Asked Minnie, Martha handed her a cone topped with mint chocolate chip
When Peter went in to the kitchen looking for a napkin for Minnie in case she made a mess with the ice cream Minnie followed him. "Brother, who is that photo of?"
"Oh, she was supposed to be your sister in-law." Answered Peter.
"But what happened?" Asked Minnie, "Did you break up? See I was right. You are a lonely being, live alone stay alone."
"It's nothing like that." Responded Peter, "We were like fire and ice, thunder and lightning. Opposites but inseparable."
"Then what?" Asked Minnie,
"Her soul had departed. But no matter what, she is among us and our ancestors. She is with us."
"She could be right." Thought Ellsnorth, "The escapees did break out and there were reports of a street war in Brooklyn." "Death will be among us." 
"Aaah, it is getting awfully broing sitting in this chair all day long, I thought they would treat me like a greek goddess but all that is happening is people walking around and the rest ask me for permission to go to IHOP or Ganso Ramen all day." Complained Lexi "I order you all to do something interesting!" A gangster walked up to her
"You want interesting?" Asked the gangster "Well I got what you want!" Lexi's right eyebrow rose in the air only 10 percent amused already, then he just, SMACK! He fell on the ground. 
"Wow. I am so amused! Clap clap clap!" Sarcastically applauded Lexi. The guy walked away thinking it worked even though her sarcasm was so obvious "Eh, getting accused of killing my life long friend kind of led me to power, but why do I still care that I am innocent?" Asked Lexi. 
Ellsnorth was in the lab staring at the knife on the desk, "Is Lexi really innocent as she says?" Asked Ellsnorth "Why was Lisa slain in cold blood?" Ellsnorth straigtened her rectangular glasses and tried to ignore her question but failed her attempt to ignore a wonder she was dedicated to, anything she was dedicated to she would not give up.
"Mom! Bye! Also don't forget the almond milk!" Reminded Peter as Martha walked out the door going towards the nearest supermarket, as Peter walked inside the kitchen to wash the dishes he saw a picture of his fiancè and bride to be, "Lisa, tell me why did this happen? Why did my life had to experience this?" Peter shed a clear tear down his cheek then felt the cold water of it drip on his shoulder. He stared at the image of her smile and then looked in her blue eyes in wonder of her death.
"Yes Crowford?"Asked Sunrise, "My prince, I have reports from the scouts, King Iceknife has came back from Greentail wounded." Reported Crowford, "My young apprentice, it is most disappointing how you report news I already see. It is worse that the scouts you select are even slower than the apprentices of Icefang." Reprimanded Sunrise, "My prince, I apologize for my unwise choices." Apologized Crowford. Sunrise did not speak a word and walked towards the food collection and found a few scraps of dragon meat found in a far reigon in Icefang, dragon meat is also a normal diet for phoenixes. "It is sad we do not have supplies to last us at least twelve moons alone." Thought Sunrise, "Well sir, we lack soldiers so we would parish within the first moon of war." Explained Crowford. "Crowford, send three good scouts  to watch over Icefang and three more to go to Greentail. Tell them to be back within the next two days." Ordered Sunrise, "Also run the place while I'm away, I'm going to take a flight in the far reigons." Sunrise spread his wings, then flapped them and took flight in the skies, "I wish you good luck!" Blessed Crowford, Sunrise inhaled sharply, "Thank you, I'll need it."
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The stained veil of Lisa when she was shot in the head during her wedding day and the cover to Stained Veil
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DrawnInBlack Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
wait so ur the one who maid that Wattpad emoticon?
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Hello! I gave you a llama because you used an icon that I adapted for dA (wattpad) in the way is meant to be used (thank you!! Aww). You are encouraged to keep using my icons to show which tool, software, company or social web you used in the making of a deviation, in a journal, status post or comment. No credit for me is needed, and also no need to request permission, you have the right to use the icons :) (Smile)

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DrawnInBlack Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I have this mini series idea called Show Gone Wrong and it is about this show called Isolation where 5-10 people are chosen across the USA to survive on an island for 3 weeks but the broadcasters and any form of escape goes missing and they are stuck on the island. Any thoughts on it? But beware life for them wont be Island Dance Cy  maybe more like this ->Robin's Hermit Dance 
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Welcome to DA! :D
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Thnx :happy: 
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Thanks for watching me!
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Np NP Animated 
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